Wednesday, October 26, 2011

"They Say, I Say"


Alex Recchia
Professor Rinke
WRT 150, Composition I
October 26, 2011

Dave Eggers says in the article, “Serve of Fail,” that college is too long. He states that students should deserve time off because of how hard they work throughout the school year, but also shouldn’t because much of their time is also spent playing foosball. There are many hours and days that are wasted and could be put into our communities. He believes that colleges should think about making service requirements in order to graduate. He had done volunteer work in college and thought it was too easy. He needed a push from a college or university to continue. Students can gain many benefits from getting involved and it would help America. Students can help the world and become lifelong volunteers. The three main points of this article are colleges should make service requirements for students because there is time in their lives for it, college is about completing requirements, and the pushing of volunteer work can make student lifelong volunteers. Dave Eggers used personal examples which tied in to support what he was writing about. It made it interesting to read how he connected his skills of playing foosball to how he became a lifelong volunteer. He appeals to logic because he incorporated statistics and facts about how America could gain from more volunteers. He also appealed to ethics because some people believe that community service is right and shouldn’t have to be required to participate in. It goes along with people’s beliefs and morals. It shouldn’t be left for criminals and delinquents, it is good for everyone. 

            Ramaley says in the article, “Service learning, more than a fad,” that service learning is a trend. Money is tight for Minnesota’s colleges and universities and many things are being limited. Educators found that problem-solving is paired with education is more than a fad. It can help with tight money problems on and off campus. Service learning can be tutoring or mentoring younger students, delivering meals to homes, and inviting neighbors to campus activities. It helps students have a better understanding of what they are learning when they learn through real-world activities.  They develop awareness to responsibilities of citizenship. Students will be excited about the work they are doing. The three main points of the article are service learning can be done in many different forms, real-world experiences deepen learning in students, and community interaction makes people feel excited about work they have accomplished. The author appeals to logic because she says that people should do more and spend less. They should save money, which is something everyone tries to do. It appeals to emotion because the outcome experience can inspire and make people feel excited. It appeals to ethics because people can believe in whether or not service learning makes a person more aware of their responsibilities of citizenship. 

            The Monitor’s Editorial Board says in the article, “How to reduce student dropout rates: link volunteering to studies,” that volunteering is key to keeping kids in school. Mr. Cruz starts kids volunteering early on in their education. Starting in elementary school, gardens are tended and trout is caught. In high school, students help immigrants study for their citizenship tests. Students reflect on all the work that they are doing and aren’t just doing it because it is on a list. Service learning adds to students having great attendance and a low dropout rate. It increases civic awareness and keeps students focused on learning. The three main points of the article are volunteering connects to academic success, engaging in the real world increases the likely hood students will stay in school, and starting volunteer work in early education is the key to keep kids staying in school. The author appeals to logic because there are many statistics to back up examples and to give information. It appeals to ethics because it is a person’s belief in whether or not starting kids volunteering early on is the reason that will keep them in school. Emotion is expressed through what is felt after reading the statistics. It can leave each person feeling differently. 

            I think the three main points of all the articles combined are starting volunteer work at a young age will help with academic success, real world experiences deepen learning in students and gives many benefits, and colleges should make service learning a requirement. I agree that starting volunteer work at a young age is beneficial with academic success and keeping kids in school. It helps them gain knowledge and experience on different activities in which they can learn from. I believe that real world experiences are the best way to learn. It gives people on the job training which is up close and you can get a lot out of it. It is beneficial to grow as a person, as well as with academic success. I don’t agree that colleges should require service learning in order to graduate. I don’t believe that all students waste time or have extra time to volunteer. It is nice to do, but it doesn’t fit into everyone’s schedule. Students try to fit in jobs and study time and other exercising activity to stay healthy. 

            All three authors agree that service learning is beneficial for everyone. They all say that leaning in real world experiences is the best way to deepen learning. They all agree that students will feel accomplished and happy about the work they have done. This will make them keep volunteering because they feel good about the good deeds they are doing. They differ because one of the articles says that volunteering should be started early on, while Dave says that it should be required in college. Starting early on would be beneficial if service learning is required in college because they will already be doing it. They also differ because Ramaley is the only one that brings up money involved and how people should volunteer more and spend less money.

Friday, October 14, 2011

Letter To Myself


Dear Alex,

                You are a very talented dancer and will be dancing even when you are in college.  It is a big part of your life and it will help you become the person you are in the future. Dance has helped you with your confidence over the years. The more confidence you have when you dance, the better you will look out on stage. As your dance teachers will tell you, if you feel like you look weird doing a movement, you probably do. You have to try your hardest and the more effort you put into the movements and think positive, the better you will look. You just have to have confidence in yourself. You have been dancing for a long time and I want to give you advice on how to be better as an overall dancer. 

          In high school, you are going to be switching dance studios. Choose to go to Linsey’s Cheer and Dance center. This studio will help you so much in becoming a stronger dancer. Looking back on my overall dancing experience my senior year, I thought that it was my last year. I am telling you what I regret, hoping that you will change to better yourself. Practicing at the studio isn’t enough. I regret not practicing enough at home, because I could have improved so much if I would have made this change.  Practicing at home will make you become persistent in moves that you are not as strong on as others. It will also strengthen your endurance. Dancing regularly will build up your endurance. Dancing a couple times a week at the studio isn’t enough. Trust me; you are going to need a lot of endurance for these dance numbers. Spending time at home, working on skills and dances will strengthen your abilities. Practice makes perfect! You want to be the best you can be, and stand out among other dancers. 

          I know if I would have practiced more, I would have more control and be persistent. It will help you on stage and knowing that you have confidence that you will do the best you can. Your dance teacher will invite you back to dance when you are in your first year of college. Dance for as long as you can! You are a great dancer, and you can keep improving if you listen to my advice. When you have a choreographer come in and teach dances, make sure you present yourself with confidence. Try your hardest and it will pay off in being in more of the dance. Don’t hold back because then you will feel like you’re not as important as others in the number. Show them what you can do! Practicing at home will benefit you with your skills and technique. 

          Stage presence and emotion play a key role in dancing. Practice this at home also listening to music and knowing what the song is about. You want to be able to portray certain emotions because the more emotion and passion you feel when dancing, captures the audience. That is really important. Even if you have all the skills and tricks and are doing everything right, if you don’t show any emotion it is boring to watch. 

          You will make many great friends from dance who will end up being your best friends. You have danced with the same people for a long time, most of them for over ten years. These people are like your second family. They are always there for you and help you with many things. Don’t lose these friends; always stay in touch with them.

          I wanted to give you advice to better yourself as a dancer. I have this one regret that I wish I could have done something about. I always wanted to be the best dancer I could be, and practicing more at home would have helped improve myself. So practice at home because it will help you with your endurance and persistence. You are very talented and put emotion into your dancing. With practicing at home, you can improve all these skills and be the best dancer you can be, with no regrets on wishing you could have been better. 
   
                                                                                      Love, 
                                                                                     Yourself in the Future :)